Golden Eyes - short story

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Golden Eyes
A new short story I was writing for a competition. I'm loving the characters that are developing. Thinking about truing it into a full novel. Here's a small clip of the opening...

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"Staring into the mirror, something I do often. Looking strait into my eyes, I watch them. As if something going to happen. But they're eye's all the can do is see. My dark hair fall right around my shoulders, I look averaged. That is until it comes to my eyes. There are a dark but bright green. Nothing different, excerpt the gold within the green. The gold looks as if its growing from my pupil. I gaze at the gold, as if maybe, some how it will vanish. But the golden lines seem as if there're froze into place."

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